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Blood and Steel (Page 11)
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Dralas
And so here is the final page for Chapter one of the Blood and Steel series!
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Nal'Vanor was now in the Arathi Highlands, having encountered some trouble with humans since he had ran around causing havoc and chaos in Hillsbrad when he had first entered. The demon could see far in the distance a large keep, however even with his speed it would take at least an hour for the demon to arrive on foot. Nal'Vanor growled, running foward towards where his master beckoned him.
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William slowly got back up, shaking a bit still from the sudden flash of one of his past memories. The experience left him both broken but also knowing that he in fact did have a past, not some sham of a life.
"What happened?" Marvin said as he entered the room, along with Vasagroth who had a thick bandage on his arm from the knife wound.
"The paladin there decided to go off and find a watch and make us chase him" Doomwhisper said who walked off down the stairs. William sighed, beginning to leave as well.
"What did happen?" Valinaria asked, along with the others persisting as well.
"I'd rather not say at the time.. perhaps later" William replied, none of the others pushing the issue after that. It took a while to navigate back out of the once great keep, but eventually they returned to the cart, where Doomwhisper waited, fiddling with her runemace.
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"I don't fail" Base muttered to himself, watching the group leave the keep.
"And I don't intend on starting on it" the troll said, hopping down from the house he had been sitting on. Base began to track them once more, not intending for his targets to get the upperhand a second time when he struck.
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The group carried on foward, Sandra healing any wounds that were inflicted during the encounter with the troll. The group was silent, like almost a quiet agreement that something was wrong. William especially could sense a disturbance, his head throbbing in light pain telling him something of an evil taint was near.
"Something is not right.." Vasagroth finally said who had pulled out a shortsword, unable to weild is larger blade at the time.
"Hello mortals" a dark voice echoed, laughing across the plains of the Arathi Highlands. Suddenly a felguard rushed at them, its axe high and roaring. William wasted no time and leapt into the air, his shield slamming into the beast as he called for Light to smite it. Other demons appeared as well, ranging from imps, voids, mistresses and fel hunters.
The group was backed into their cart, the demons laughing as they surrounded them.
"What is this!" William yelled, trying to burn the ground with holy fire, though difficult since he wasn't standing on the ground rather then the cart.
"I have come for something" the voice from before said, stepping out from beneath a hill, revealing a large eredar demon.
"And I will have it!" the fel demon roared. William glanced over to see Doomwhisper with a look of hate and anger on her face, wanting to kill the demon and not stop at anything to do so.
"Light! Give me strength!" William roared, a pillar of Light shattering the gloomy sky and striking him, instantly burning away any demons that were too close to ashes. William's renewed hope in finding his past gave him the willpower to fight on, not wanting to lose while he was this close.
"Have it me demon!" William shouted, jumping off the cart with his mace to his side.
"Gladly" the eredar responded, the two rushing at each other to meet in battle.
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Writer's Comment: Well, I do notice that my pages are a bit short, so depending on what everyone else thinks, I'll make it longer or not. Mainly I want to keep a balance between a page that is not a drag, but not so short it felt like nothing happened. Give me feedback please!
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Post by
Patty
"Light! Give me strength!"Herod ftw.
Nice page ;D
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Post by
Adamsm
Nice as always man.
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Dralas
Well, I'll begin posting this on Wednesdays as well if the story becomes popular enough. For now though, I think I'll stick with the usual schedule, but thanks for all the feedback!
Post by
Morec0
wtb chapter 2
Post by
Septimus
OMNOMNOMNOM...Tasty.
Post by
Dralas
Today is Friday! So, later on today after school I'll try and post the next page to the second chapter. Will have to hurry it though since I need to try and finish it before the raid I'm doing tonight.
Notes to keep in mind:
- Make the page longer
Post by
barthem
nice story, and the pages are long enough, you tell only the story and not all kind of useless background (you now like why the dark dwarfs catchet tge troll and i like that)
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