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Post by
Morec0
(( Here it is. ))
- "Valinaria, is that you?" Nilon asked.
- "Not who you were expecting to see?" the female Blood Elf smiled.
- "Not really, no," Nilon said. "So, you joined the Scarlet Crusade?"
- "After the fall of Garithos' New Alliance they were the only ones with the strength to fight the Scourge," Valinaria explained. "And I couldn't just sit back and do nothing, could I?"
- "I suppose not," Nilon shrugged. "But, when I learned that Prince Kael'thas had abandoned Lodaeron to the Scourge I figured you had gone with him."
- "No," Valinaria shook her head. "I was on a seperate mission elsewhere during the events. When I returned Garithos was dead, the group that called itself the Forsaken was formed, and the Scarlet Crusade was the last living group in the Plaugelands."
- "So, naturally, you joined up with them,"
- "Pretty much, being both a Blood Elf and an ex-Scourge didn't help my chances of getting in, but my knowledge of the Undead's capabilities - mostly bits and pieces of the Lich King's thoughts that were in my head - was a valuable asset. A few skirmish victories later, I'm a ranking commander."
- "In that case," said Nilon, "perhaps you could tell your freinds to let us go?"
- "Valinaria nodded. "It's alright, boys, I know these guys. You can release them."
- There was a tense, unresponsive silence. "Are you sure that's wise, milady?" one of the Crusaders finally said. "You yourself warned us of how easy it is for the Scourge to disguise themselves as the living."
- Valinaria sighed. "Very well." She walked up to Nilon, their faces level. She looked straight into his eyes, but it felt different, it felt almost as if she was looking into his mind, into his very
soul
. After a moment she faced away from him and then moved on to the others in the group, doing the same to each..
- "Alright," she said, turning back to the Crusaders, "they're alive. Let them go." Slowly, the Crusaer's backed off, leaving Nilon and his companions' weapons on the ground.
- "Thanks," Nilon said as he picked his weapon back up. "Well, we should get moving."
- "I wouldn't suggest that," Valinaria said. "Night will be falling soon, and the Scourge take advantage of that. We have a camp nearby, you're all more than welcome to stay there until the morning."
- Nilon nodded. "Your words make sense, and thank you." The two Blood Elves walked off together.
- As they walked away, Celen glared at Valinaria. A confusing hate stewing inside her.
...
- "Leave none alive!" commanded Morec. The four Scourge had already cut a bloody swaith through the outer part of the monestary and were now killing every living creature inside of the cathederal section of the building. The Crusaders rushed to meet them, but instead met their end.
- Morec and his minions slaughtered their way up to the doors of the inner sanctuary. The Lord Death Knight would need a key from a different part of the monestary to open it. But he didn't have time for that.
- "Arcues," Morec said to the Rogue-Engineer, "I belive that this is your specialty."
- Arceus grinned madly, then reached into the folds of his cloak and retrieved a medium-sized explosive. "You might want to back up," Morec complied, he, Garen and John stepping back a few paces. "Fire in the hole!"
- The blast unhinged the doors, and Morec was sure that some of those inside had been crushed by them. He walked up to the now-clear doorway. The humans inside were staring, trying to see what the cause of the explosion had been. One in particular - Morec was fairly sure a Scarlet Commander by the name of Renault Mograine - glared at Morec with hate as the Lord Death Knight walked into veiw.
- "Infidels!" Renault shouted, "They must be purified!" In response all remaining Crusaders in the room charged the Scourge.
- "Garen! John!" Morec shouted, "defend me!" The two Death Knights jumped in front of their master, unleashing their respective abilities. The frost and locusts tore away at the living, obliterating their numbers in a matter of seconds.
- Morec thought that was the end of it, but a battle cry that's volume rose over the wind and insects proved him wrong. The Scarlet Commander ran through the storm and the swarm, untouched due to the Holy Light that surrounded.
- "Please," Morec sarcasticaly said, stepping forward past his minions. Renault swung his mace at the Death Knight's skull, but Morec shot his hand out - his unholy power breaking through the Divine Shield - and grabbed the Paladin's arm, stopping the attack. "You're strong," Morec told him, "but your not who I'm after." He ran his Runeblade through the Paladin's heart.
- As Renault died a new, female voice spoke up - the timing made Morec think these entire set of events had been planned out. "Mograine has fallen?" the voice of High Inquisitor Sally Whitemane yelled, "you will pay for this treachery!" The Inquisitor ran out from a secret room in the back of the cathederal straight at Morec.
- Morec swung his runeblade at Whitemane, expecting to kill her with a single blow. But, somehow, the High Inquisitor managed to survive, and - by the use of some spell - incapacitated the undead.
- "Arise, my champion," she said as she began to channel a resurrection spell.
- "I don't have time for this," Morec murmured, and, with every last bit of his power, he broke through her spell and then, after pulling her close enough, he ran his runeblade through her chest. She fell to the ground, dead, just like the Paladin.
- Morec nodded to his two minions, "bring her."
- He turned his back on the cathederal and began to walk across the blood-stained grounds towards his next destination. Behind him, his minions carried Whitemane's corpse in tow. Arceus - the lazy worm - just watched as he followed behind. Morec grinned at his accomplishment.
-
She will serve the Scourge well
.
Post by
Dralas
Was expecting for Valinaria there to be more secretive or have a betrayal like feature, heh, guess not though.
Post by
Morec0
Was expecting for Valinaria there to be more secretive or have a betrayal like feature, heh, guess not though.
I had never thought of that, but yeah, it wouldn't qwite fit for my role for her in my story.
Oh, and I don't want to cause too much panic, but I'm starting to suffer from writer's block. The next few pages are done already, but the ones after that... they're kinda bland as I see them. Course, what I think dosn't really matter, I'll have to see if you readers approve.
Post by
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Post by
Morec0
Writer's Commentary:
- More of Valinaria, which is another reason that I killed of Jason, I like to limit the groups to five people and there was already Nilon, Celen, Thrrag and Scalebender in the good group, and for the most part they are still essential to the plot of my story.
- And it seems that Morec was looking to get a healer in Scarlet Monostary. Whenever I do a dungeon in my WoW-writing I like to throw in quote from the actual place, make it seem like they're actually there in-game and not in some parallel WoW-like world.
- Now Celen has to put up with
two
Blood Elves. Things are going just great for her, arn't they? And what will become of Sally Whitemane now that she is doomed to become part of the Scourge? These awnsers and - much like the annoying failure that was
Lost
- even more question will be coming in Page 26!
Post by
Patty
BUT WHITEMANE WAS HOT! WHY?
Anywho...good read, other than the odd typos which are lingering around.
Post by
Morec0
BUT WHITEMANE WAS HOT! WHY?
Well she'll be hawt Scourge
Word and Worder
Post by
Morec0
I suppose, her appearence -SPOILER-
is
going to change in the next page.
Post by
Patty
You could do the typical Mary-Sue appearance description!
"Her long, fair hair looks almost white in the Light of her cathedral. Her passionate, revealing red clothing hugs her curves perfectly, making the Inquisitor look like a seductive temptress. As she appears before Morec, her breasts bounce uncontrollably from within her tight corset."
etc. :)
Post by
Morec0
You could do the typical Mary-Sue appearance description!
"Her long, fair hair looks almost white in the Light of her cathedral. Her passionate, revealing red clothing hugs her curves perfectly, making the Inquisitor look like a seductive temptress. As she appears before Morec, her breasts bounce uncontrollably from within her tight corset.
Unfortunately, Morec realized that she was only a bunch of pixels
."
etc. :)
Fix'd
Post by
Patty
She can be as probing and investigative as she wants, especially because she's pixels. :<
Post by
Morec0
lolerz XD
Post by
Patty
mm what type of "Probing" wll she do exactly?
That staff's gotta be good for something.
Post by
Patty
Involve my blood elf, a draenei, night elf and a camera. Then we're set for a good night. ;)
Also, Thraag and the Goblin are guys. :>
Post by
Morec0
Also, Thraag and the Goblin are guys. :>
So is Renault Mograine.
Post by
Patty
Also, Thraag and the Goblin are guys. :>
So is Renault Mograine.
Let's forget about them.
Post by
Morec0
Who?
Post by
Patty
Who?
Precisely.
Post by
Morec0
Who?
Precisely.
No, seriously, who are we talking about?
EDIT: And who are you anyway?
Post by
Patty
:|
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